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The Dark Moment is the moment when the worst possible thing that happens, happens. This is when it looks like all hope is lost, the magic thingy needed to save the world has been destroyed, the hero is dead, or the girl of your dreams has gone back to her ex-boyfriend.

I’ve heard some people refer to this as the Grey Moment. I’m not sure if the Black Moment and the Grey moment are one in the same (I’m hoping I’ll find out when I read Vogler’s book.)

Carrying on with our “Shrek” example, the Dark Moment is when Shrek realizes he doesn’t really want to be alone, he wants to be with Fiona. But when he goes to tell her how he feels, he overhears her telling Donkey that no one wants to be with someone who’s hideous. Shrek thinks she’s talking about him and slinks away. All hope for Shrek’s happily ever after is lost.

But we know this isn’t the end of the story (unless, of course, we’re writing a tragedy, and then this would be the end). But because I write happy endings, there is one more major plot point to go: the Climax (and Denouement)

An excellent question from Josh on my Facebook page: “What do you see separating each act in the three-act structure? Is it enough that each act “feels” different (different location, different theme, different subplots at the forefront) and the transition itself is less important? Or is there a required storytelling milestone (PoNR, Dark Moment, etc.) that tells us one act has ended and another has begun?”

When I’m thinking about story structure and three-act structure, I don’t think about “differences” in act in terms of location, theme, subplots. Many stories take place in one location or have one or two themes, etc. But I know some authors do look at their acts that way.

For me, it’s the milestones/pillars (which I think is the more traditional way of looking at the three-act structure). So we’re talking about the Inciting Incident, the Point of No Return (PoNR), the Turning Points, the Dark Moment, and the Climax.

The Point of No Return signifies the beginning of Act II. Up until then, Act I is traditionally character introduction and plot setup. But by combining the Inciting Incident and the Point of No Return I tend to have a very short Act I and/or blur the line between Act I and Act II.

Act II is the part of the story where the “stakes are raised.” For the most part the situation gets worse and worse (although there can be some bright moments of “false success”.) This can happen in the same location, subplots can (but don’t have to be) explored, different themes can come out, etc. This act (if we’re talking about script writing is double the length of Act I and Act II) and if you want to be really structured, Act II can be divided into a miniature three acts as well.

Act II ends with the Dark Moment (which I will be blogging about soon). This is the moment where all seems lost. And we move into Act III, where the protagonist picks himself up and comes to a new realization about himself and his world.

In Act III everything comes together for a satisfactory climax and resolution. (Note: if you are writing horror or literature you don’t have to have a satisfactory ending. The readers of other genres, however, will want love to conquer all, good to win over evil, or justice to be served.)

This is my basic understanding of the three-act structure
(and story structure in general). It is very script oriented and some novelist may have a different perspective on structure. For a deeper understanding of this I’ve been told to read Blake Snyder’s “Save the Cat”. It comes highly recommended and is on my “to be read” pile.

It’s a short tale and best done with a picture:

Every now and then the birds at my feeder go crazy and disappear. Now I know why.


And I did spend some time wondering if I should say “More Tales…” or “More Tails…”


The Turning Points (and Mid-Point) always seem a little looser in the structure for me. These are major points where the story takes an unexpected turn. They are found in the second act (if we’re looking at three-act structure)

(hmmm, perhaps I’m working in three-act structure and not mythic structure. I’ll have to look into this. Anyway … back to Turning Points).

The two major turning points in “Shrek” are:

1)Shrek fights past the dragon into the tower to wake the Princess and she isn’t what he was expecting. He isn’t what she was expecting either.

2)The Princess refuses to let Shrek see her during the night and we learn that there is something “different” and mysterious about her.

Depending on how the story is organized there might also be a Mid-point (putting a three-act type structure within the middle of the second act). The Mid-point is a significant event that changes the direction of the plot (just like the Turning Points) which occurs … you guessed it … at the mid-point of the story.

This is also the mid-point of “my basic mythic structure” posts. Next time: The Dark Moment.

Quick Links: Video Links

Today, a few links to videos.

This is a cute story about an inventive reading program for children and dogs. I first saw this on my local news, but it looks like it’s been picked up from Good Morning America.

Reading to Dogs Helps Kids Build Literacy Skills.


And this link is because I’m a theater geek and this completely impressed me.

This is an article from the Discovery Channel show “Daily Planet”  about the Las Vegas stage show “Le Reve” (a theatrical production that involves flying, acrobatics, dancing, acting, hydraulic lifts, and a big pool of water.)

The part about the “Le Reve” starts approximately 6:15 into the video.

(please excuse if there are any advertisements before anything – I’m still learning about posting video and stuff).


Today I’m Waiting

It’s nothing I haven’t waited on before, but today I’m much more conscious of “the waiting.” I knew when I decided I was going to be a novelist that I’d need persistence and patients and both in spades, so this waiting isn’t unexpected. And really, it’s been less than 24 hours since I sent it back and there are other people in the world besides me. I can wait my turn.

I just find it strange that some days the waiting doesn’t bother me. I sit down, I write, I plot, I blog, I check email. I carry on. Life as usual. But that right now, I’m checking email, checking email, checking email….

And yes, I will admit that this is an exciting stage in my life, however there will be lots of exciting times in my life. So the question really becomes, how can I enjoy the excitement of the time, but not let my worries overcome me?

Because, let’s face it, it’s my worries and insecurities that have me obsessively checking email. In truth, the response I’m waiting for will either be positive or negative and I will move forward from there. I have never been unable to adapt and grow and change. Sometimes it’s been in the wrong direction, but I always discover this, adjust course, and carry on.

So day I’m going to try to acknowledge my ability to deal with situations as the come up (and try not to worry about what “might” come up).


The second mythic structure point I use is the Point of No Return. This is where the protagonist has no choice but to go forward on the journey (aka: the plot). Up until this point the hero or heroine has a choice to say no and return home. I often combine this point with the Inciting Incident and just fast-track the section of “everyday” life.

If we look at three-act structure, I believe the Point of No Return comes at the end of the first act and launches us into the second act (I suppose I should do some more reading on the three act structure as well).

In the movie “Shrek” the Point of No Return is when Shrek agrees to rescue the princess in so he can get his quiet swamp back. Up until this point Shrek has had the option to return home and just deal with those in his swap. Once he agrees to saving the princess he’s committed to the plot (the quest … or journey).

Another example: “The Wizard of Oz”

In this movie the choice is taken from Dorothy. Her Point of No Return is when the tornado picks her up and puts her in Oz. Where Shrek has a choice, she doesn’t. She must go on her quest or face being stuck in Oz forever.

Next time: Turning Points.

The first point I use is the Inciting Incident. In short the Inciting Incident is the first event that starts your protagonist on the journey of the plot. As I understand the mythic structure of the Hero’s Journey there is often a scene or two that shows the protagonist in the “real” world, in his or her everyday life. We learn whether they are happy or not, whether they feel they have power in their life, what their occupation is, sometimes meet family members, etc.

The Inciting Incident is the point where something changes in the protagonist’s routine. For example in the movie “Shrek” we see Shrek in his life, living alone in his swamp and loving it. Then the fairytale creatures invade. This invasion disrupts Shrek’s solitary life and forces him to take the first step on the plot of the story.

I often combine the Inciting Incident with the Point of No Return, but you don’t have to. Next time: The Point of No Return.

The Cat Highway

While my husband and I are still considering whether or not to welcome another cat into our family we have never really been without feline company. The moment we moved into our townhouse we realized we had a major thoroughfare running through our backyard. The cat highway, dips in the ground allowing passage under the fence on either side of the yard, only closes in winter when the snow gets too high.

There are a number of cats who roam our neighborhood, and while I’m not a big fan of letting furry companions run loose, I have appreciated their company (and started naming them – sorry if it’s not your real name). Cats enter the yard, hang out, watch the birds at the feeder, weave through my garden (sometimes fertilize it), and look in the patio door and chat with us.

Their company was never more appreciated when our cat died over Christmas this year. Frodo, a long-haired orange and black cat, started sitting on our patio step. I don’t know why. She’d never done it before. She’d just sit, after the sun had set, for hours. Night after night, she’d curl up tight against the snow and cold and keep us company on the other side of the glass patio door. We called her our Temp Fuzzy.

Frodo is still our Temp Fuzzy but there are others (now that the weather has warmed up). Neo, Cassie, Willow, Bubba, and a few others who I haven’t named yet (but probably will). Some hang out, some race through. And I love watching them.

And now I’ve revealed that I am a crazy cat lady—regardless that they aren’t my cats.

Quick Links: Writing Tips

A few quick links of writing tips for your reading pleasure today.

Agent Nathan Bransford has a humorous and helpful blog post for writing problems, “Do You Suffer From One of These Writing Maladies?” Every now and then I still stuffer from the second one down.

Mr. Bransford’s post begins with a mention, in brackets, of “[commercial voice]” and everyone seems to have their own definition of what “voice” is so I think I’d post Jennifer Greene post at Romance University which discusses her thoughts on the difference between voice and style “Voice vs. Style

And finally, a few more writing tips from Chuck Sambuchino at Guide to Literary Agents Editor’s Blog, “5 Screenwriting Tips All Writers Can Learn From.”

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